ext_12443 ([identity profile] jack-pride.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2003-05-02 04:05 am (UTC)

*whimper*

This is gorgeous. I love that you gave them children to raise. Really, really love that.

Strangely enough, I think the little detail that gave it the extra kick was that Calli kept her original surname. Kept it from seeming too good to be true.

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