ext_2127 ([identity profile] resonant8.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction2005-03-11 10:34 pm

Lie challenge: Campfire Tales by Resonant

I think I started this the last time there was a Lie challenge.

Fraser/Kowalski, NC-17, 3100 words.

Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] cesperanza and [livejournal.com profile] kaneko for beta.

Campfire Tales

[identity profile] estrella30.livejournal.com 2005-03-14 06:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, Res, this is *wonderful*

Shit, shit, shit. He never should have said anything, because now he could see that he'd had hopes for this conversation, how stupid was that, he'd had motives he hadn't even known about, and now he'd fucked up everything.

This is just so perfectly Ray, right here. Outing himself without even consciously knowing he's doing it. Ray is a lot smarter than he thinks *g*

All of this is wonderful - thank you so much for it!