china_shop: Close-up of Zhao Yunlan grinning (Default)
The Gauche in the Machine ([personal profile] china_shop) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2005-03-22 02:02 am (UTC)

Oh, wow. This is just beautiful! The whole complication of moving to Florida and being happy there, and then upheaving and ending right back where they started, only completely different, and the little hints and nuances that Stella's come to terms with that, and with the changes that're going to happen in her life. *loves*

Also, this:

“Is this yours?” Ray said, his voice alarmingly high.

Stella narrowed her eyes. “No. I stole someone’s pregnancy test on the way home from the grocery store.”


Is just hilarious! :) :)

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