Tora ([identity profile] torakowalski.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2005-03-22 03:22 pm (UTC)

Oh, so beautiful. Personally, think RayV and Stella could be fantastic parents ... can't imagine it working with RayK and Stella but with RayV I reckon they could work it.

You wrote them all really well (as other people have said) but you also got the way they are with each other perfectly too :)

"Your Ray" that line is perfect *adores* :)

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