Tora ([identity profile] torakowalski.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2005-03-31 10:10 am (UTC)

Aww ... hehe.

You have no need to worry at all, that was not in any way awful. It was incredibly funny and sweet :)

the saucer was flying but the aliens were communing with the Loch Ness Monster May be the best line ever!

And I agree with the ^ that bit about the definite article was so cute :)

PS I always capitalise Mountie, just cos it's short for Mounted Police, which would be capitalised ... I may be very, very wrong!

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