ext_52537 ([identity profile] one-traveller.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2005-05-21 08:34 am (UTC)

I started reading this out loud to my husband as he was going through his printouts on how to make three different kinds of machine pistols out of stuff you can buy at the store. Ended up reading him the entire thing. Much laughing. I'm also to tell you that "it's very well written."

As much as I adore the Big Gay Sex I find myself really wanting Ray to have a baby. I'm sure the fact that I'm turning thirty-seven tomorrow has absolutely nothing to do with it;) Though Ray's circumstance is unique-less than a month to decide the course of the rest of his life, including what sex he's going to be-you did a great job with what are some very real feelings. Love and lust and yearning and comedy with some profundity thrown in for good measure.

P.S. We are merely a harmless human couple. We are not bent on world domination.

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