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ds_flashfiction2003-05-05 07:33 am
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Hourglass Challenge
I've never written anything before. And I can't believe I'm actually posting this here. Even the feedback is awesome.
Just an idea I had. An idea in exactly 100 words.
Religious Experiences or What's in a Name
Barbara and Damian looked on proudly as the priest drew a wet cross on their son's forehead. ‘I name this child Stanley Raymond...’ The baby sobbed bitterly.
*******
Stella stood beside him, a fairy princess in tulle and lace. ‘Do you, Stanley Raymond Kowalski, take this woman...?’ He cringed, hearing muffled sniggering behind him. Christ, he would never live this down.
*******
Weak sunlight filtered into the dark tomb. ‘Your name is Stanley Kowalski?’ the nutjob he’d been partnered with asked incredulously. He turned round angrily. ‘Look, my dad...’
*******
‘Ray, Ray, Ray, Ray...Ray’, moaned Fraser as he spiralled to orgasm. Ray smiled.
Just an idea I had. An idea in exactly 100 words.
Religious Experiences or What's in a Name
Barbara and Damian looked on proudly as the priest drew a wet cross on their son's forehead. ‘I name this child Stanley Raymond...’ The baby sobbed bitterly.
*******
Stella stood beside him, a fairy princess in tulle and lace. ‘Do you, Stanley Raymond Kowalski, take this woman...?’ He cringed, hearing muffled sniggering behind him. Christ, he would never live this down.
*******
Weak sunlight filtered into the dark tomb. ‘Your name is Stanley Kowalski?’ the nutjob he’d been partnered with asked incredulously. He turned round angrily. ‘Look, my dad...’
*******
‘Ray, Ray, Ray, Ray...Ray’, moaned Fraser as he spiralled to orgasm. Ray smiled.
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You're lying. You must be.
Anyway, I love this -- it's so spare and cool, and made me grin as Fraser proves he's perfect for RAY, not Stanley, Kowalski.
More, please!