ext_14303 ([identity profile] scriggle.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2006-02-10 01:07 am (UTC)

Great job! You really captured Ray's frantic worry over Fraser and his relief when he learns Faser will be okay.

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