Ray was sure Fraser would probably find that process abso-fucking-lutely fascinating.

Oh, cranky Ray. SO much love. (And then, when you've read a bit further, it becomes clear it's tense-terrified-frustrated Ray, which is even better.)

And then you crash us right from snarky Ray into oh-god-what-happened-to-Fraser and mrrh. I like the hospital description, it works well, and with the time.

the scene just replayed louder and with more red this time,
Fucking fantastic line. It just fits, and it sounds like that's how it would be, you know?

And, oh, god, that last paragraph just absolutely kills. Oh, Ray.

*kinda lost for words now*