ext_14543 ([identity profile] timian.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2006-04-18 02:03 pm (UTC)

This was wonderful, and so much fun to read. Your Frannie POV rocks, and the little details you snuck in were terrific. I especially loved this: "am I not pretty enough, am I too subtle" Yes, Frannie, YOU ARE TOO SUBTLE. Hee!

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