lynnmonster ([identity profile] lynnmonster.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2006-04-20 01:30 am (UTC)

*flails*

I am so very very glad I decided to ketchup with all the badfics I hadn't read yet -- this is SHEER BRILLIANCE.

But then they'd taken him to their ship and drilled into his head and stuck something up his butt and talked to each other in a language he couldn't understand as they stared down at him and shook their heads as if he were somehow a disappointment to them.

Seriously, I think you captured something there that speaks to why the thought of alien abduction is so scary -- it's the potential for galactic-scale DISAPPOINTMENT. For reals.

I totally relished your tell-don't-show, breezily narrative tone. And the straight-(type)faced delivery of some of the funniest lines.

I am hella impressed; I am utterly charmed. You dog, you!

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