ext_29188 ([identity profile] capella-fic.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2006-05-04 05:50 pm (UTC)

This is just great: edgy, unnerving and seriously hot, just like Ray himself. That handcuffs scene was the one that sealed my fate, DS slash-wise (as in a nice idea becoming a total obsession.) Your take on it makes it even better.

I love so many of these lines, and especially the ending, but this bit in particular made me exclaim aloud:

Sometimes Fraser's eyes look like a baby's, innocent and concentrating, like he's putting the world together and making snowmen out of it. Right now there's something different back there. He's an adult, he's got secrets.

Wonderful. I hesitate to say it, but please let there be more...

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