ext_23613 (
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2006-05-11 11:44 am (UTC)
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Awwwww, finally a kidfic I like. And this:
Still skinny, still with hair that stuck up comically in all the right places, but his eyes were huge, and his smile, when he saw Fraser looking at him, was missing a lopsided hint of sadness that Fraser had never noticed until it was gone.
is a wonderful sentence. I love it.
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Still skinny, still with hair that stuck up comically in all the right places, but his eyes were huge, and his smile, when he saw Fraser looking at him, was missing a lopsided hint of sadness that Fraser had never noticed until it was gone.
is a wonderful sentence. I love it.