ext_7031 ([identity profile] lilac-one.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2006-05-14 04:06 pm (UTC)

This is so very, very yay! Delmar is wise - I really like how you've developed the character. It's also very cool how you lay the foundation here for Benton's ill-fated hunting trip a few years down the road. Excellent job!

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