ext_12399 ([identity profile] ardent-muses.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2003-05-13 10:04 pm (UTC)

Oh man

You did it again, Dude. I'm glad I didn't read this before I posted. *G*

Yummy, crunchy words, doing double and triple duty -- telling how it feels and, more importantly, how it *feels*.

I love the parallel structure, too.

You filled my Fraser-angst cup right to the brim. Beautiful!


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