ext_12399 ([identity profile] ardent-muses.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2003-05-14 09:10 pm (UTC)

This is gorgeous! Love the transition of meaning... and transition of hand ownership. *g*

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. It was truly a pain in the ass to write that hand without specifying who it belonged to. *G*

"It's okay, Frase," Ray whispered. "I got you."

And love that line, most of all.


Thanks. :) It's a favorite of mine.

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