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2003-05-14 09:53 pm (UTC)
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Then, slowly, he lathered his hands and closed his eyes.
Killer last sentence! And a lovely story as well. Ray's such a romantic, I can see him washing and, um, other things, with the soap of his beloved :)
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Killer last sentence! And a lovely story as well. Ray's such a romantic, I can see him washing and, um, other things, with the soap of his beloved :)