ext_12485 ([identity profile] lucifercircle.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2006-09-02 03:19 pm (UTC)

You have an excellent Frannie voice.
I really liked this, I think you did a very realistic portrayl of what children go through when they're growing up and trying to be normal.
I also thought Frannie's thoughts on the romance novels were quite funny.
Well done.

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