I read this before I got on the plane, believe it or not, but had not time to comment. And yesterday, with S&A and writing...I managed to forget to comment! Wah!

But, oh, I love this so much! I love reading undercover-at-a-gay-bar stories, absolutely adore them. They're my guilty pleasure, in fact. And this was such a wonderful, hysterical twist on that storyline. I adore this Fraser - totally head in the game, giving it all he's got. And oh God, Ray just dying on the inside - I couldn't stop laughing. I was sitting at the gate, laughing my ASS off, actually. John Hancock! This is Ray, my lover! Oh, God, I just...loved everything about it.

I think my favorite part is that the 'queer' part turned out to be the fact that it wasn't queer. What a wonderful way to play around with it. And they really do sound like a couple bickering, which just goes right over Ray's head. And just...God, I really loved this. Stuff from you always makes me so damn happy.

once you've been in love you know it across the room, know the curve of her ear, the line of her chin, you know it almost in the dark.

I absolutely love this line. It's gorgeous.