ext_307978 ([identity profile] marcellapolman.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2006-09-21 11:30 am (UTC)

Hey, I like this! I like it that you did a pensive, first person Ray (as opposed to Fraser, who would be the more obvious choice). I like nearly all of it. My only regret is the emphasis placed on the fact that it isn't just about sex. Because, well, isn't that obvious? Other than that, very nice fic, and very Ray.

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