I love this! Ray is so cute in your story, I just want to go "awwww!" and pinch his ickle cheek. *g* I hope Fraser gives him a big hug. I really like the idea of the two of them having an old-fashioned courtship, too; it just fits them somehow.

_{Well, sice you said, "please point out any spelling mistakes, typos etc." - The words in brackets are sub-sections of the main sentences, so I don't think they should be capitalised or have full stops/periods at the end, but everything else is perfect! *g*}