ext_9238 ([identity profile] joandarck.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2006-09-29 06:38 am (UTC)

I don't get the first one? Explain?

“What’s the magic word?” she asked, like he was one of her nephews, and asked that God grant her grace not to staple Dewey’s pants to the desk.

Yes; yes!

The Lieutenant hadn’t been happy with Frannie’s pink thing, at first. Then, she pointed out that no cop would ever steal pink pens with fluff balls on the end, or sparkly pencil sharpeners.

YAY! YES!

And then she finds Elaine's book, and the entire, every word of And One Way She Didn't is gorgeous and perfect (Welsh=Love, copFrannie=Love) and then the ending! The last one! I was really moved, you know? It's sweet and a little sad but also funny and kind of insane and yet harmless and believable and wow.

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