ext_6263 ([identity profile] ruthless1.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2006-10-04 09:08 pm (UTC)

That was great. I gotta say - you give good Ray! Whenever you write him - I can even hear the nasal twang of his voice as I am reading. With this story - I felt like this was part of an episode (except for the sex) that got cut - the voices were that true.

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