ext_12485 ([identity profile] lucifercircle.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2006-10-05 02:04 pm (UTC)

Oooooh I liked this. Fraser being sarcatics was great and Ray's nervousness was very real-feeling. And “Well, next time you could try bringing me flowers,” is a killer last line. Yay!

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