ext_4057 ([identity profile] nos4a2no9.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2006-10-07 10:22 am (UTC)

I did like the Fraser voice, and his reflections on Ray were spot-on. Also, that line about "homophobia in the American police force" was so Fraser - clinical and detachted, sure, but also kinda emotionally invested in the statistical problem. Nice work, and I hope you write that Part II.

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