ext_28362 (
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2006-10-30 01:22 am (UTC)
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Way too cute! A great 'blast from the past' and
I
certainly wouldn't mind seeing more of their adventures aboard the Enterprise.
One little thing caught my eye, tho.
Ray didn’t want to end up in the brick
, I think you mean 'brig' (i.e., the ship's jail) here, don't you?
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One little thing caught my eye, tho. Ray didn’t want to end up in the brick, I think you mean 'brig' (i.e., the ship's jail) here, don't you?