china_shop: Close-up of Zhao Yunlan grinning (RayK dark hot serious)
The Gauche in the Machine ([personal profile] china_shop) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2006-11-03 10:51 am (UTC)

Oh wowwowwowwowwow!

And, you know, there will be time
To wonder, "Do I Dare?" and "Do I dare?"


eeeeeeeeee!

Should I, after tea and meat and ice
Have the strength to force the moment to its crisis?


Oh! Poignancy!

Partner the Mountie, the freak (but my freak),
Differential, glad to be of use,
Polite, cautious, and meticulous;
Full of lots of words, but a bit obtuse;


Ha!

Wow! I'm stunned. I just read this twice, and um... *tries to be articulate* This is just, like, essence of Ray and essence of UST and slash, all that "Do I dare?" waiting and wondering and fretting, and teasing meanings out of innocent gestures, and innocence out of misunderstood moves. *LOVES* I don't know the original well, but this, this I love. ♥

Btw, did you mean "prophet" instead of "profit"? Or am I being obtuse? :)

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