ext_14629 ([identity profile] spainja.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2006-11-03 12:20 pm (UTC)

Wow. That was brilliant!

In Kugluktuk the people come and go
Talking of Pierre Trudeau.


Bwah!

I'm so impressed that you were able to maintain the flow of the original, make it rhyme, and still totally slip in Ray's story. And, you know, this poem makes so much more sense when you actualy know the frickin' backstory.

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