This is amazing. I adore Prufrock, and here you have managed to take the essence of that poem and tell Ray's story through it, yet retain the meaning of the original. Wonderful and so well executed. I remember the Potter-verse take on The Waste Land (http://ladysisyphus.livejournal.com/294368.html), which was great, and this comes as a wonderful coda. dS seems to be the perfect canon to use as a pastiches on Prufrock. The Ray-voice is just so clear. Great take on Eliot. I love fandom, full of Lit.geeks gone wild.