ext_14865 ([identity profile] ladyjestyr.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2008-11-04 09:30 pm (UTC)

I, too, found this via a rec from [livejournal.com profile] isiscolo, and I, too, loved it. I think what I loved most was the contrast between the wistful uncertainty, the "would it have been worth it?" of the original, and Ray's certainty that it _would_ have been worth it. Such a tiny, subtle change between original and homage, and yet it illuminates so much in the change.

Bwah! Wonderful, wonderful stuff.

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