ext_4057 ([identity profile] nos4a2no9.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2006-11-21 10:31 am (UTC)

Really beautiful, and a perfect response to the prompt. I like the repetition of "because he made a mistake once, and he can't make it again". That really cuts to the heart of Fraser's feelings for Victoria, doesn't it? Fraser could never afford himself the luxury of being wrong, and this one time, this one moment when he did something he shouldn't, eats him alive. Poor woobie!Fraser! Anyway, thanks for yet another great Fraser/Victoria piece. You're the best!

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