ext_21365 ([identity profile] honeybones.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2007-01-03 01:43 am (UTC)

That was so wonderful!~

Ive never been able to picture RayV fitting in in Florida before. This was just a perfect way it couldve happened. And Hahah! The cops thinking Ray was mob, and Ray thinking the cop was a hood was BRILLIANT! I also loved that Stella could really see how unhappy Ray was with the Yacht Club crowd.

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