ext_6168 ([identity profile] troyswann.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2007-01-10 10:51 pm (UTC)

*love*

Ray! Ray Ray Ray! *handflapping* Okay, so it took me like a week to get here, but I'm so glad I did. This story was my celebration for being a good little worker-bee and I so win! Because it's terrific!

he'd get a nice big BLT and a seat near a window overlooking the green; while he ate, he could contemplate the death of his youth and self-respect.

This story is full of this kind of line, pithy and dead-on Ray.

Yay! And I'm glad Ray got to be cool again and to keep the girl.

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