ext_1628 ([identity profile] nakeisha.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2007-01-15 04:19 pm (UTC)

What a lovely interpretation of space. Really different and so well done.

I could clearly hear Ray throughout this, and I love how he moved from wanting space to not needing it once he had Benny.

Great story.

I still have your long one to read - but I won't get to that today. Am running out of steam very quickly.

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