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ext_3554 ([identity profile] keerawa.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2008-08-02 03:57 am (UTC)

I am so excited to be re-reading this story. That moment when Ray calls Robert Fraser's erasure a "property crime", and sees Fraser's reaction - wow. This entire first section has this sense of breathless, driving urgency, and Fraser's character really does seem to shine through even stronger in these surroundings than in 1990's Chicago.

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