ext_12485 ([identity profile] lucifercircle.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2007-01-16 04:32 pm (UTC)

Very enjoyable. I like the description of the holes in Ray's life, the idea is very interesting and you explore it well.

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