ext_6556 ([identity profile] arrow00.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2007-02-25 07:52 pm (UTC)

I really enjoyed Button, and I usually am not a huge fan of kidfic. But she's a great kid, and totally believable as the spawn of the two of them.

>“It’s a hard thing, that,” his father offered, and he looked old in the way of parents.

Wow. Yeah.

Loved the kiss, and the fact Fraser drags his heels, recognizing the stolen nature of the moment. His yearning is lovely, especially the way he imagines Ray in the kitchen of the little apartment. Fraser's desire is for more than Ray's hot bod.

>“Well, what I meant was – that, I, uh, meant it.”

So Ray! He's such a terrific pop, too.

Thanks for this! I hope you are hooked and write us tons and tons.

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