ext_4057 ([identity profile] nos4a2no9.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2007-05-09 07:52 pm (UTC)

I really, really loved the last line here - the whole fic lived up to your usual standard, of course, but that last line was poignant and lovely. Also the petty sweating urgent world of life was also very nice.

Also yay for ghost!Bob and dead!Caroline! Their very presence in a dS story calls for extra/unnecessary !!!

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