ext_6156 ([identity profile] j-s-cavalcante.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2007-05-10 09:01 am (UTC)

He'd thought, being dead, he would have more answers.

Oh, man. No matter how few words you write, you still manage to devastate with one killer last line. Oh, Bob. Beautiful characterizations here. Very impressive in such a short piece. Bob is so Bob. He doesn't even do "dead" easily, does he? :)

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