ext_14455 ([identity profile] slidellra.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2007-05-12 09:31 pm (UTC)

Oh, this is fantastic! It captures the shocky, fractured feeling of an unexpected really bad thing beautifully. So vivid. And the use of "You're an obsessive freak" to mark life continuing was terribly endearing.

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