ext_4057 ([identity profile] nos4a2no9.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2007-05-23 06:03 pm (UTC)

Yay! I'm so glad this went up (and that the Rays got off). It is so much better with PORN as a point!

You are so fabulous. That was the fastest blowjob writing in the history of the world and it turned out very, very well. I am particularly fond of this exchange:

"Big words." Ray wasn't able to help the teasing tone of easy affection in his voice. It still surprised him when Kowalski (who sounded only a very little bit breathless) said--

"If the end of that sentence has the word small in it, you can just suck your own dick, Vecchio."


Classic Ray/Ray dynamic. Wonderful job, m'dear, and you truly rock the porn casbah. (What? It's the new single that is sweeping the nation!)

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