>If a smile could be like crying, that's what it would look like<
Aw, woobie!
Ghost Fraser was just perfect, so believable. I usually don't go for supernatural stuff, but this was just a touch, and it was a perfect touch. Loved how Fraser obliquely revealed he'd been visited too; the whole thing about the dental hygiene of wolves and their gluttonous impulses.
>I'm so sorry, the ghost had said, tears freezing on his face, so so sorry. . .<
Ah! So chilling and perfect the way this brought the whole thing right back after Fraser's laconic "What brings you to Canada."
>Fraser looked shocked, which almost never happened.<
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>God, it was like stripping all the wall paper out of his brain and putting in new carpet all at once,<
Perfect Ray-brain!
>Fraser, though, was not completely disgusting. Not even partially.<
Not even. :)
Loved the hug when he first came in, and the frizzle-kiss at the end and Ray's smugness.
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>If a smile could be like crying, that's what it would look like<
Aw, woobie!
Ghost Fraser was just perfect, so believable. I usually don't go for supernatural stuff, but this was just a touch, and it was a perfect touch. Loved how Fraser obliquely revealed he'd been visited too; the whole thing about the dental hygiene of wolves and their gluttonous impulses.
>I'm so sorry, the ghost had said, tears freezing on his face, so so sorry. . .<
Ah! So chilling and perfect the way this brought the whole thing right back after Fraser's laconic "What brings you to Canada."
>Fraser looked shocked, which almost never happened.<
!
>God, it was like stripping all the wall paper out of his brain and putting in new carpet all at once,<
Perfect Ray-brain!
>Fraser, though, was not completely disgusting. Not even partially.<
Not even. :)
Loved the hug when he first came in, and the frizzle-kiss at the end and Ray's smugness.
Lovely story.