ext_4057 ([identity profile] nos4a2no9.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2007-08-15 07:03 pm (UTC)

[livejournal.com profile] keerawa said this much better than me, but the loss-that-echoes-a-loss structure you chose was amazing. Particularly the bit with the candle stub, and that hauting little dangling modifier "after." You put more emotional weight into a single word than I've managed to include in whole stories. You are very, very brilliant.

And because I can't be the only one not to say it:

Awwww, Fraser!

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