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2007-08-27 12:42 pm (UTC)
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Oh, so painful. So powerful.
Beautifully described, both the destruction and how Ray was feeling. And I love how you put in his anger too.
This worked so well.
Poor Ray. Porr Benny.
*Sniff*
I see why 'Storm' came to mind for this one. *See dragon story for discussion*
We have used 'Thunder' for 'Doubts Of All Things Earthly'.
How about 'Snow' that's left. And after all the snow globe was pivotal really.
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Beautifully described, both the destruction and how Ray was feeling. And I love how you put in his anger too.
This worked so well.
Poor Ray. Porr Benny.
*Sniff*
I see why 'Storm' came to mind for this one. *See dragon story for discussion*
We have used 'Thunder' for 'Doubts Of All Things Earthly'.
How about 'Snow' that's left. And after all the snow globe was pivotal really.