http://brigantine.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] brigantine.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2007-08-28 03:51 pm (UTC)

Thank you so much!

Christ on a crumpet.

*giggle*

Honestly, the ending - and mostly everything leading up to it, actually - surprised me just as much as anybody. All I really knew was that I had to get Fraser to Mamet/Ray before he pulled the trigger - except then Mamet really wanted to pull the trigger. We argued. I stole four of his bullets. So there. Neener neener.

I do tend to see Ray as a sort of out of control but in control person pretty much all the time. Ranting and flailing (and possibly getting into a fist fight) and thinking a dozen different thoughts all at the same time is how he figures stuff out. Fraser, on the other hand, is a very linear thinker, and Ray confuses the hell out of him. Someone has to.

After this, I think I need to write something frivolous. Possibly with smut. :)

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