I love this to bits. I should have gone to bed long ago, but I was glued to the screen and had to finish it. I'm not familiar with MWG, but just the IMDB entry was enough to understand this.

God, Ray-as-Mamet is so broken. In the end of the first part, I'm thinking you deliberately wanted to break our hearts. And when he says "There's not enough left." I just -- ow. And Fraser, so focused, and with all his guilt, and then when he talks with Rob: that part is just brilliant.

I love Dief here, too, and his interaction with Fraser, and also his protectiveness of Ray.

Yeah, and thanks for the happy ending. *sniffles*

I can't wait to see what you write next.