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ext_3554 ([identity profile] keerawa.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2007-10-28 09:25 am (UTC)

Well, I finally managed to carve out enough time to read a 25k story, by the simple method of choosing it over sleep. And this story was totally worth it!

This was a tremendous read, sweet with hints of pain, and just incredibly satisfying. I love the way you write Vecchio. I could hear him, so clearly in my head, from the very first moment where he showed up at Kowalski's door with a bottle. Vecchio's slow courtship of Kowalski, when RayK was so obviously seeing himself as a cheap date, was wonderful.

I love what you did with their three homes. RayK all unpacked and messy, until the day when he finally decides to make a real life for himself there with Vecchio. Vecchio's apartment. God, that just crushed me, that empty apartment. And then Fraser's perfect little hand-built cabin, never intended for a man living alone.

The sex was scorchingly hot throughout, and the scene where Fraser came home to find a cooked meal and two sarcastic Rays waiting for him made me so happy!

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