ext_1206 ([identity profile] sundara.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2007-11-14 03:59 pm (UTC)

Oh my...I'm not a huge lover of Ray/Ray, but you definitely made this *work*. Didn't sacrifice any of their personalities, but instead, used all their individual quirks and issues to build up a real feeling of closeness. And the threesome--! Yes, boy, uh, that worked too. Guh. Great story!

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