coloredink ([identity profile] coloredink.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2007-10-27 06:11 am (UTC)

This was great. Perfectly done. Your Ray voice is excellent, as is the backstory--and the structure really worked with and for the story, which is a feat in and of itself. I can't imagine how this story could or would have been told any other way. :)

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