that last bit was a kick to the head, and so romantic at the same time.

*preens a bit* My work here is done.

Thank you kindly! I've always loved the way Ray instinctively takes the part of the little guy, the underdog. *loves on Ray*

His usual bounce, weave, one-two hit 'em and bounce, it's not happening.

i can feel the rhythm of boxing when i read it. it's beautifully constructed.

Hee. That's a favorite of mine, too. :)